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This is really nice looking, the way you framed this and the amount of detail you added in is fantastic!
A few points I will make that can use a small amount of practice: The lines in the background must have taken a long time, but perhaps you should try to take a little more time to keep them straight, unless you were intending for them to curve. If so disregard that. ^^ I feel that a few of the shadows in their faces could be darker (possibly the areas under the chin, and inside the ear), and maybe adding some areas of highlights within the hair would help to keep it from looking slightly flat. Compositionally, I feel that maybe the figures should have been slightly larger and more centered? It seems the stripes take up a lot of space, but again, it could be intentional.
Other than that, this is a very well done piece. You did a very nice job making the pose look good, and the use of the media is very precise and skillful. Keep it up!
A few points I will make that can use a small amount of practice: The lines in the background must have taken a long time, but perhaps you should try to take a little more time to keep them straight, unless you were intending for them to curve. If so disregard that. ^^ I feel that a few of the shadows in their faces could be darker (possibly the areas under the chin, and inside the ear), and maybe adding some areas of highlights within the hair would help to keep it from looking slightly flat. Compositionally, I feel that maybe the figures should have been slightly larger and more centered? It seems the stripes take up a lot of space, but again, it could be intentional.
Other than that, this is a very well done piece. You did a very nice job making the pose look good, and the use of the media is very precise and skillful. Keep it up!